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Re: Headwind - CH 1
Thanks, everyone, for the reviews. I think I've gotten all I need for this chapter; I know more-or-less how I'm going to amend it. Hopefully I hear from some of ...
Apr 20, 2009 -
Re: Headwind - CH 1
Thank you all so much for your input! Once again, I appreciate the opinions. I JUST realized that I used the term Chytry in this chapter when you pointed it ...
Apr 16, 2009 -
Re: Headwind - CH 1
Thank you both for reading and reviewing! Rubin, I was concerned about Natalia's flatness, my own self. My goal was to try and make her seem mysterious in the first ...
Apr 12, 2009
